9 July 2011


To Moto Q9h. I knew your time was coming. But I didn't think you'd leave me like that. But I guess that which goes, goes. There is no how did it happen? It just happens. To the Good Times, coz that's all that matters and it is all that's left.

Read at your own risk.

Mensch was watching her carefully. Her hair, her face and her style mesmerized him. He was spellbound. He could feel the tension between them. He just could not wait any longer. But Klimmer would always stop him. He'd never personally tell Mensch to stay away from her, but Klimmer's own love for Gabriel and her reciprocity, was enough to keep him at bay.

Mensch walked up to Klimmer and :

M : I love her more than you ever will.
K : So, what do I do? You should tell her that.
M : And what if she leaves you after that?
K : Then she leaves me and you can have her.
M : You will do nothing to make her stay?
K : You fall in love and you fall out of love. And neither is in your control. So if she falls out of love, she falls out love. What can I do about that? Maybe I'll fall in love with someone else.
M : What if she cheats on you?
K : Then I'll forgive her.
M : You wouldn't be jealous if you saw me with her?
K : What is gone is gone. 

And then there was a gunshot.

Ending 1 :

M : You're a fearless man. And your time had come.

Ending 2 :

M :  You are a fear...less man.

K : And that's why she's with me. Not with a mass of flesh on the ground.

Ending  3 :

M : You are a fearless man. And I love you.

Her white dress was now stained with blood.

K : Well, what is gone is gone. Your place or mine?

I'll miss you Moto. We had some really good times. And as much as it hurts that it was an economic loss, what has happened has happened. Sunk Cost. Abh bas aage soch sakte hain.

Song : Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea by Cab Calloway.


Devna said...

who dies?! :\

Ethereal said...

I like what you write..

Rohan Chawla said...


Thank you.

Ethereal said...

Btw..thank you for leaving that comment on my post..not sure you got my reply to it.. I'm kinda still figuring out the ways around this place..

how do you contact/leave someone a note other than commenting on their comments...is there another option?

Ethereal said...

well.. too bad!

Abhilash said...

The story, Me likes. What now, about the new phone ?

Rohan Chawla said...

Haha, I am thinking of a new phone to replace the old new phone :P

Rohan Chawla said...

Good question.